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"Fall"
  by Y.D.


This kid grew up as a smart kid,
But always ended up in the strife,
Never knew about consequences or the meaning of life,
He only knew how to struggle,
Seeing his parents argue while stucked in the hustle,
He was doing things wrong for second,
Ended up being abused with his dads belt buckle,
Determined for a better life,
But ended up deeper in the struggle,
Just like a murderer pushing force into a knife,
Everything just became real,
Parents are on welfare and gaining less on they're salaries,
Really nothing but showing me the true face of reality,
I'm falling in a endless abyss,
Falling and falling.. Never stopping..
I keep asking myself.. What is this?
But fuck that I ain't gonna keep falling,
I gotta get back up and resist,
Gotta ignore all the struggles and fix the errors,
Instead of laying down on my floor with broken knees,
And can't do nothing but crawl..
If I continue.. I will .. always fall..
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Date Submitted: Jul 02, 2009 (01:08 AM)
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  Anonymous Desi...
09/06/09 (01:19 PM) 
damn i can feel this pain deeqy poo. i just wanna take you in my arms and hug the fuckoutta you...

  KayKay225
07/09/09 (09:14 PM) 
I LOVE THE PASSION. awesome write. 10 strz

  Chainz.
07/04/09 (01:29 AM) 
very good write bruh, you already know flow is tight word plays good.. keep doing you! 10 stars

  TUANE
07/04/09 (12:37 AM) 
Mad talent bruh. The flow is crazy in this write. But the thing to always to remember is to never give up. No matter how hard things get in life, dnt give you. There may come a time when you feel like you are at rock bottom, and you cant fall anymore, but you will. I have been there. But I always kept my faith in tha man up above and he brought me through it all. Without him, aint no telling where I wouls be now. Keep tha pen moving. 10starz! adna favorite

  Cell
07/02/09 (03:58 PM) 
this was dope, i can relate in many ways

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