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"fallin"
  by sharielle


Im fallin
in a dream
This feel so real
But this cant be me
Parallel to everything
My world is upside
Im fallin into bad habits
Soon im to break down
Fallin
Into an endless state
Between love and hate
Loving myself
hating the world
liking a boy
loving a girl
turning the hands on the clock
but time still moves at the pace
no going back
reality stares me in my face
watching the tears
replaying the years
no remorse
made decisions
my choice
forgive forget
or
slit my rists



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Date Submitted: Jul 04, 2009 (09:39 PM)
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  David G.
09/25/09 (04:36 AM) 
i agree good vividness...and never stay on the ground when u fall down...always get back up

  ciana8stock
07/05/09 (05:41 PM) 
felt your emotions through this piece...every one falls down at some point in their life..but once you've fallin the only way you can go is up..gotta stay positive in a world full of craziness..nice write though

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