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"Falling Down (LD Challenge)"
  by Group: Lyrical Divas
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Falling Down by Planted Daisies


Falling Down (LD Challenge)


Falling down
Spiraling frowns
Upside down
And right side up

Falling

Falling down
The rabbit hole
Clocks and gadgets
Of many sizes
Is all I see
Now that I am

Falling

Falling down

Down the rabbit hole
When will the end finally be here?
Will I fall flat
Or will I float?

Now that I am
Falling

Falling

Falling down
Down the rabbit hole

Tea cups
And kettles of tea
Is all I now see

Why did I chase the rabbit?
Was it cause he was dressed
And he knew how to speak?
Why did I follow him?

And now I am falling

Falling
Falling
Falling
Falling down
Down the rabbit hole
Let me close my eyes
So I don’t see my end
Come near me

Now that I am falling…..

Planted Daisies2009
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Date Submitted: Jul 04, 2009 (12:30 PM)
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  angeleyes1
07/05/09 (02:09 PM) 
very beautiful write I so hear you I do feel this way sometimes and have to pick myself up keep them flowing much love

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