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"Falling Down"
  by Planted Daisies


Falling Down (LD One line Challenge)


Falling down
Spiraling frowns
Upside down
And right side up

Falling

Falling down
The rabbit hole
Clocks and gadgets
Of many sizes
Is all I see
Now that I am

Falling

Falling down

Down the rabbit hole
When will the end finally be here?
Will I fall flat
Or will I float?

Now that I am
Falling

Falling

Falling down
Down the rabbit hole

Tea cups
And kettles of tea
Is all I now see

Why did I chase the rabbit?
Was it cause he was dressed
And he knew how to speak?
Why did I follow him?

And now I am falling

Falling
Falling
Falling
Falling down
Down the rabbit hole
Let me close my eyes
So I don’t see my end
Come near me

Now that I am falling…..

Planted Daisies2009
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Date Submitted: Jul 04, 2009 (12:22 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (2)
Date: 07/06/09 (11:00 PM)
Author: KiNg-Go0B3r
Poem Title: Down Fall

Date: 07/04/09 (12:30 PM)
Author: Group: Lyrical Divas
Poem Title: Falling Down (LD Cha...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (6)
  Poetic Lyricis...
07/09/09 (12:33 PM) 
I love the fairy tale vibe you got going on here...Like the old saying goes...all that glitters is not gold

  Autumn joi
07/08/09 (12:18 AM) 
i love alice in wonderland & all references lol :) very creative idea you put into this challenge...

  Duice
07/07/09 (12:15 PM) 
I was waiting for you to FINALLY hit rock bottom the whole time... Falling Falling... Falling... Still Falling....

  KiNg-Go0B3r
07/06/09 (10:25 PM) 
wow now this was somethin like real talk it stimulated my mind, i feel lik ei should respond, and i may

  MzSpoon aka Ly...
07/05/09 (08:32 AM) 
I liked this one, diva. I may have to check out the other challenges as well.

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