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"fantasies ( you made come true )"
  by sexy azz brownsugar
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Fantasies by Ziear


we get back to your place ... we kissin and rubbin ... your hand on my ass , i rip off your shirt buttons .. your lips kiss my neck , as i nibble your ear ... unhucking my bra strap , you dont stop there... making our way.. to your bedroom door , through kisses of passion .. our clothes hit the floor... now your licking my neck , moving down to my breast ... i can't resist the earge .. i run my fingers across your chest... tracing your abs touching every ripple , making me moan as you suck on my nipples... emotions are high as you make your way .. down to my bellybutton .. on the bed where i lay... my body jerks from your every touch.. gliding your hand slowly down to my thigh .. speading my legs opening them wide... your tonuge goes deep , deep inside.. made the pussy so wet.. had to close my eyes.. thinkin to my self damm my baby got skillz ... you sucking on my clit .. is giving me chillz.. i open eyes thought i was dreamin , pussy so wet and you got it creamin.. tasteing my juices as it run down you chin.. i moan louder as your fingers slide in.. got me arching my back.. and your curlin my toes , saying out loud , " yes baby .. like that!!... you start lickin faster .. as i grind my hips.. fucking me with your tongue.. as i cum on your lips. got me breathing hard .. i cant believe.. that you just fulfilled our fantasies ...
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Date Submitted: Nov 18, 2007 (08:50 PM)
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  SpitFire
11/28/07 (04:41 PM) 
You know how to write a fire ass sex poem.

  shortie4ya
11/26/07 (07:23 PM) 
good poem deff 10*s

  TheArtist07
11/18/07 (10:35 PM) 
straight up raw and deep emotions..nice write..just expand your pieces more and get it organized a bit out..just speakin the true word

  King Of Heater...
11/18/07 (09:13 PM) 
thatz tight it was hot got me goin alittle

  Ziear
11/18/07 (09:06 PM) 
i really like dat. shawty you got mad skills

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