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"FAR TOO UNHOLY"
  by THE GOD WAR-CLOUD


Omnipotent..........

No not me
Nor in the least
Ever could be
Because I'm far too unholy
Harnessing this harassing bastardizing brutal beast within
Who loves feasting on filthy's festering sin
Unveiling exorcism's cursed demonic red eyes
With skin falling off my disfigured derelict decomposing disguise
Exposing my mutating manipulating monstrosity
Ultimately destroying what little generosity
I have left in me

And even comparing myself to greatness
Is nothing more than a mortar's self imagined foolery
Amusing my animated freakish-looking external shriveling shell
As I horrifically propel towards dying's old age
Eventually lying in a corroding decaying grave
With a cracked crumbling headstone
Being the only evidence shown
In explaining my incompetent grim tendentious existence
By describing and proving
Just how non-omnipotent I truly am................

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Date Submitted: Oct 28, 2009 (04:01 PM)
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  ButterflyDream
11/03/09 (06:26 PM) 
Very dark and potent...wonderfully,written.

  blakkrose
10/28/09 (11:31 PM) 
PLEASE n.s.i explain to me what is holy and what isn't? Not referrinq to them now, but I'm so tired of hypocritical kats, satan in a sunday hat bourqeoise an djust th eultimate holier than thou bit. Be real is ll im sayinq. Any who...um..... this scribe was just hella crazy mistah, i mean so much truth and wonder and just madness,but we are all just human, and all we can do or try to do is the riqht thinq and hope the ultimate let's you in on judqement day... *siqh* you know i love this scribe. ...
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  no shit.itsana...
10/28/09 (04:59 PM) 
I could debate what is holy, but I will just take the common understanding and leave it be. Ashes to ashes and all of that stuff, but until we lay our heads down for oblivion/eternal sleep....I believe we have the power to see ourselves as what we are. And that is that omnipotence, armed with positive purpose, that mades that G a capital being.

  Successful
10/28/09 (04:43 PM) 
wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo war cloud this was mos def a well put together poem loved it

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