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"Fatherly Love"
  by poundcake


Your fatherly love is like
April showers
Rain on me please from
The heavens above because
Your my gift from God
I used to find it odd
That after only a few short years
My fears of never truly having
Daddy were washed away
When you whisked into our lives
I’ve tried so hard to put into words
The simple feeling of being loved
You’ve accomplished to make me feel
Its Surreal how big of an influence
You’ve had on me
The fact that you never tried but
Just always were the only man in my life
Man enough to love me completely
For who I am
Your wisdom and words stick to bones
You always made home feel like home
You took me under your wings and
Made me feel like one of your own
I trust you more than I have ever
Trusted any other man
Not my biological but
Still father of the year
At the very mention of your existence
My mothers smile is bright enough
To send the sun into exile
To walk me down the aisle
Your name is at the top of my list
Because you have been a great father to me
And all I could have ever wished
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Date Submitted: Oct 07, 2007 (06:36 PM)
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  SlimCutta
10/08/07 (09:15 AM) 
Beautiful touching write. A father's love can never be replaced. It can never be duplicated, i guess thats why its so strong and something to cherish and take in with every ounce of your body. This write had it...glad you got that love.

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