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"Father's Away"
  by pu2tanny


Coming back from school

picked up from my aunt

sad emotions in her eyes

inner stress

deep blue

arriving home

family's mood

sad and uncool

Father didnt come home last night

pretty unusual

Family meeting

just got the bad news

i was told only 3 months

judge had ruled

but that wasn't the case

now its causing pain

i had to be stronge for a family of females

now all i have left is a few souviners

Fathers come back to fill in the torn hearts

so akward now

i feel so dreeded apart.

Oscar M. Stewart
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Date Submitted: May 27, 2008 (10:41 PM)
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  dreamer 1993
09/25/08 (04:08 PM) 
wow that was deep i can imagine how your feelin. but i loved how you put it down keep movin your pen and let your emotions out it helps

  Demon of Darkn...
05/29/08 (01:20 PM) 
INDEED DIS IS FULL OF PAIN, HEARTFELT, TAKEN A LOT TO PUT DIS ONE OUT MA..INCREDIBLE EMOTION RUNS THRU IT . HOT FROM START TO FINISH...

  Mz Prose
05/29/08 (12:23 PM) 
damn... I feel your pain ...sorry u hadda go through this ... great job conveying the emotions in ur writes

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