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"Fathers"
  by Quite


Fathers in the ghetto,u need 2 stand up.
And live by example,so stop giving up
Because believe it or not,ur presence is a must.
Now is the time,4 a morality thrust..
So inspire ur children,2 luv and not fuck.
Because being a father,goes beyond a nut.
So cherish ur family and not these cute butts.
If god can love us,despite all our mistakes.
Than y can't these men,lay down with 1 mate.
And support the very children,they help 2 create.
Fathers from the ghetto,it's offically ur time.
So rise 2 the challenge and make history a liar.
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Date Submitted: Nov 19, 2008 (08:57 AM)
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  Chocoolate
12/29/08 (06:58 PM) 
This is more than tenz lil brother. You preach the truth for real. I have to admit though there are more fathers raising their children than ever before and it's a lot of mother's walking away. Good write.

  Stoykes
12/07/08 (02:36 PM) 
Loved it, loved it and loved it some more. I like this dedication to the men...or rather boys, that need to grow up...better yet 'Man Up' and take care of our 'fatherless' children. it isn't fair to the single mothers or child(ren). ~Stoykes

  DeeDee8908
12/06/08 (11:08 PM) 
THIZ WAZ GR8 VERY INSPIRATIONAL N TRUE, I HOPE WHO EVER READZ THIZ, GIVEZ THEM A CHANGE OF ABOUT A SITUATION (MALE)

  Abstinence
12/02/08 (10:42 AM) 
i feel that this need to all nice piece thanks for sharing

  BxGrL
11/21/08 (06:44 PM) 
love it bro... you really did ya thing.

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