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"Fear"
  by lovely Lil Kiena


Take You Down (Instrumental) - Chris Brown


I've got this problem and all I can think is damn
He's not my man
I'm unsure how this even began
Perhabs his lack of attention
Maybe his lack of comprehension
See this other man been checking me for a while
As I close my eye's I envision his sexy smile
Smell his intoxicating cologne
Tonight I don't want to be alone
Sick and tired of sleeping in an empty bed
I dial him on the phone
Tell him I want him to come make me moan
Once I invite him in I'm kinda shy
Up until he starts kissing on my thigh
His loving is something I can't deny
Exactly what I've been wating for
From a man I truely adore
But right before he gets to taste the pie
I realize it was all a lie
I can't understand why I had this dream
As I look over I let out a soft little scream
Cause my man's still not here
Maybe if he was he would hold me & rid the fear>>>
Of us ever being apart...

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Date Submitted: Jul 07, 2008 (02:29 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 07/07/08 (03:15 AM)
Author: MEga
Poem Title: No Fear

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comment icon  COMMENTS (18)
  Wrighter
10/18/08 (03:46 PM) 
This was beautifully written- it was abundant in depth- and I felt the fear slowly invade my mind as I read each following line. WONDERFUL! xoxo wrighter

  BL24DHxUND
09/26/08 (01:21 PM) 
Damn, that was deep ma. Wishful thinking i suppose...

  Jewseph
09/18/08 (05:08 AM) 
LET MEE CATCH HIM WHO EVER THAT IS. OUT WHEN HEE SHOULD BEE HOME WIT YOU AND THE KIDS....JUST KIDDING NOT....NO I AM I. LOVE YOUR POEMS.... IM KINDA NEW AT POEMS,BUT HOW HARD CAN IT BEE IF YOU WRITIE WHAT YOU FEEL....UNCLE LOCC...

  shorty2008
09/18/08 (01:06 AM) 
I FEELING THIS ONE THAT WAS DEEP

  touchdapearl2
08/12/08 (03:46 AM) 
wow i dont even wanna mention why and how i can relateable but this was truelly a piece that brought my situation to mind!

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