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"Feature Film"
  by Dimplez


Up in the projection booth,
at my place of work,
I started all the movies,
and called my baby with an urge.
I told him to talk dirty to me,
because I had a few hours to spare.
He asked, why do it over the phone,
when he could be there.
I heard a knock on the door,
and with haste let him in,
he licked his lips slowly,
I knew it was on then.
Slipping my work polo over my head,
and grabbing my breasts,
I lifted his shirt,
and clawed at his chest.
It was a matter of seconds
before we were on the floor,
I told him to wait tho,
I had to lock the the door.
He followed me
kissing on my neck,
his hard manhood lengthening,
and teasing my back.
I turned to him
as he pushed me against the wall,
entered me and picked me up
just as I was about to fall,
wrapped my legs around him
and we made sweet love,
Now for your feature film
played from above.
I felt an orgasm coming
but before I could scream,
I heard ohs and ahhs from below
interrupting my cream.
I turned around to see
our shadows plastered on the big screen,
the crowd looked pleased,
if you know what I mean ;)

*lol, haven\'t written one of these in a while haha*
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Date Submitted: Oct 26, 2009 (03:05 PM)
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  StraY12
11/17/09 (07:04 PM) 
I was feeling this, very visual and very smooth, even tho' you haven't written it gots that kick to it that's like wow! I was feeling your climax tho' that was dope LoL! nice way to get it done! keep writing!

  G.A.
10/29/09 (08:45 PM) 
love it.. the whole imagery and creativity.. and the humor to this you had in this was truly funny.. wow got my mind goin wild over heer lol... nice drop

  da black princ...
10/29/09 (12:24 AM) 
ummm, what a movie! I'm not getting out to the movies enough (lol).

  dontsaymacbeth
10/28/09 (02:16 AM) 
i have the worst images of the lumina, the sex couch, the projection room, and you going in my head right now...please tell me this isn't based on fact hahahaha. i love it though; it's a really good write! it's hilarious and sexy.

  mikeb30
10/28/09 (01:49 AM) 
steamy is what this was..and to throw the twist in @ end shows how u have to appreciate one's creativity

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