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"Fed-up with people."
  by SpitFire


I can't do this anymore.
Tryin' to be everything and more.
Tryin' to keep from walkin' out the door.
Have you ever felt nobody liked your for you.
Just liked you for what you do.
Try to play you as a fool.
Get mad when you say no.
Make you feel lower than the floor.
This is to much stress I just want to go.
Hells got to be better than this.
I'm walkin' around with a bald-up fist.
Mama says it's cause I'm always tease.
I can't even relax when someones rubbin' my shoulders.
I tell people my name but i don't let then get any closer.
Put up a wall around my heart and just feel the breeze getting colder.
I'm even lookin' at family members funny.
Even family can make a simple argument turn into money.
I'm done tryin' to please everybody.
It's all about me now.
'Til I'm old and seanile.
Ain't nobody gonna hold me down.
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Date Submitted: Nov 16, 2007 (12:04 PM)
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  Rainbow &heart...
12/18/07 (11:39 PM) 
im feelin this 100% i was saying something like this early. 10 stars

  cocoaprincezz
12/14/07 (07:06 PM) 
baby, this is in my favorites. i have totally fallen in love with your poem techniques and you got a gift with this one.

  Mojo JoJo
12/13/07 (09:17 PM) 
I was just reading poetry and had to comment on this...... I can relate to this poem in so many ways for real as many times as I have been used by people I understand how you my brotha you feel like you cant trust anyone just like you said even your own family members which isnt right but how can you trust when you let someone get close and they backstab you for real this is really deep AWESOME WRITE 10strz and im faving it

  Blaque Beauty
11/17/07 (01:38 PM) 
We all feel likethis every now and then.

  Nilla
11/16/07 (04:52 PM) 
Rambling.. You should have paced yourself, bae. This had potential to be an excellently expressed, angry, poem BUT you didn't pace yourself. ii still gave you ten, though. So, don't trip at my constructive criticism.

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