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"Feel better"
  by Blakfiya


Sokokugo Zenya (Instrumental) - Gagle
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Pardon me,
But it seems something’s wrong
Life has a rhythm and you’re limping
Unbalanced in your ecosystem
Not in the drivers seat….drifting

But hold on

I can’t make anything go away
But I can make a smile appear

If it’s difficult to do on your own
Then just wait right there…


Funny Pictures, Images and Photos

and I know its temporary
but if you string it all together
you can have a good time
whenever you’re feeling low

and if you need to
just close the window and cry

funny Pictures, Images and Photos

and tomorrow we can try again


*not the total cheer up piece, but.....its what I felt.
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Date Submitted: Nov 17, 2008 (09:33 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (9)
  Syndel
11/22/08 (02:07 PM) 
yes it was a total cheer up because i needed it and yes today days later this is what poetry is about being there when you need it thanks

  BlessedOne
11/18/08 (11:48 AM) 
This would cheer me up if I was down. It would turn my frown upside down!

  Magic101
11/18/08 (09:31 AM) 
wow this iz a wonderful piece! the pictures are hilarious too... i enjoyed this one. great ink! 10 starz

  drybaggij
11/18/08 (04:30 AM) 
Hands down, funniest stuff I've seen all week. Might even have an avatar pic to steal here.

  Jody
11/18/08 (01:49 AM) 
but more so prob "and if you need to just close the window and cry"

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