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"Feel"
  by Blakfiya



(no title) - J Dilla Jay Dee
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feel
you make me
beautiful
Baby
beautiful
me make you
feel
.
sustained
passion,
dripping slowly
Love burgeoning beyond,
fulfilling us
beyond burgeoning love
slowly dripping
passion
sustained
.
eyes linger
wandering you
kisses following
dreaming in starlight
following kisses
wandering you
linger eyes
.
trapped
in gazes
knowing love
gazes in
trapped
.
Feel?

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Date Submitted: Mar 16, 2009 (02:31 PM)
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  Qυз...
03/18/09 (05:37 PM) 
So thought provoking the way you write...I loved the candid expression of intimacy...absolute bliss to read.

  ★Blessed...
03/16/09 (09:56 PM) 
You did it up on this one girl. Some people can't walk and chew bubble gum and you write mirror poetry beautifully...doesn't seem fair! lol

  THE GOD WAR-CL...
03/16/09 (08:46 PM) 
I'm going to just put all of poem in the mothership and sail to galaxies unknown. Just so i can introduce your contagious thoughts to knowledge seeking searching life forms. Amazing! So amazing!...........

  Jenesis
03/16/09 (08:16 PM) 
awh...nice short, sweet simple peice here...definatly was a good one...i like the feel and the calm tone it reflected...definatly liking this right here...10 starz nothing less

  B. Rose
03/16/09 (06:51 PM) 
So smoot loved the vibe of this piece... and you ended it very well yo... lovely...

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