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"Feel Me"
  by BLAKK ROSE


Feel me like 2 Pac once said,
Ironically most aint feel him till he was dead.
BUt neither here nor there,
I came in being great I aint trying to make it there.
And I aint trying to make it fair,
For rappas, ckuz they spit reckless, with no care.
The system conspiricizes against rappas??
I they do it to themselves by admitting to clappin.
Whats worse Is most int performed the action,
But decided not think before acting.
They portraying someone else but playin themselves,
Ckuz they trying to make us believe but miserably fail.
You get a "E" for effort tho, let me escort yo
Crew and you for reals... what you think im sayin "NEXT!!!" for??
You dont belong and it wont be long,
Till we find the rest of them and make em get gone.
Like Kanye West and Killa Cam'ron.
The Consequnece... getting exposed like toes to thongs.
Or girls who unaware they showing they thong,
But got low rise on, you goin bout it all wrong.
Its on I aint meaning a light,
More like an annual event made for excite
Meant for those who feel what I recite.
And even those in the streets tryna to stop me like red lights,
But ckant ckuz im only embraced by green lights,
So my drive infinite and the flow hold everlastin life
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Date Submitted: Nov 16, 2007 (01:53 AM)
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  DariaAkasha
07/26/08 (11:01 PM) 
classic Blakk....i lov this right here....u put it down like u got the platnium records on da wall already and what i love about it, wit a flow like dis, ya damn sure could and should in my book. fa realz tho....

  Nee
03/28/08 (02:22 PM) 
"They portraying someone else but they playing them selves, cause they trying to make us believe but miserably fail" -- Hell yehh. You clowned.

  Tina T
11/21/07 (09:27 PM) 
"The system conspiricizes against rappas?? I they do it to themselves by admitting to clappin. Whats worse Is most int performed the action," you dnt even kno how much im feelin u on this..i dnt think it will let me qoute the whole poem lol!

  *De246Empress*
11/21/07 (07:54 PM) 
Im feeling you on this and loving the flow of it.. it is true what you said in the beginnin about 2pac..another classic write

  Nairobi
11/19/07 (10:52 PM) 
another intriguing write... you continue to captivate me... we should work together on one!

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