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"...feeling insecure"
  by Ms Lips


To Whom It May Concern:

Even though you asked me to be your girl
I worry if I'm really what you want

Am I'm just something to do for the moment?

Until some, gum popping, big booty, man stealing bitch comes along
And takes you as quickly as the wind blows

If I am

Please tell me now
Because I can't go through some waiting to exhale, heartbroken hotel, crying until I have no more strength to cry type shit

Spare me

Half of this mangled heart I have left

I can't go through sleepless nights
Wondering if your with some other chick
You claim your 'JUST FRIENDS' wit'

And I don't want to come across
Any flirtatious notes
You might send to her on myspace
Curious to know
If she's the one taking my place

And I don't need the headache
When you start to tell lies
Trying to disguise
What you really feel

I don't need you to sugar coat shit for me
Just be fucking real

Because I've been stomped on, shot at, and stab countless times in the back
And I don't think I could survive any more battle wounds

I hope you understand what I say
Because I'm sick and so tired of playing the fool
So if this is not what you want
Tell me before it goes any further

Cuz I really can't take anymore of this BULLSHIT........
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Date Submitted: Apr 20, 2007 (03:47 AM)
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  HersheyLuv
04/25/07 (08:49 PM) 
Girl you definitely be on point! I definitely relate to alot of what you write. I just wish I could have read your peoms about a year ago when I was going through my bullshit.

  Jonathan Robin...
04/25/07 (03:02 AM) 
this is some reality for some of the brothers who don't seem to realize what they are doing....love your flow and reality of the situation!!! I like-I like

  rsenio
04/23/07 (02:11 AM) 
Thats how i be feelin sometimes, cuz believe me girls do it too, they think jsut cuz im a pretty boy that i be cheatin on them so its okay for them to do it to. I hate when people do things like that, and you expressed what i wanted to say perfectly, good write lady.

  Vixen
04/22/07 (02:52 PM) 
i feel you ma!

  BriBaby
04/21/07 (01:35 AM) 
i c were ur comin from keep writting poems like this k

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