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"***Feelings***"
  by KrazySexiiKool






flutters in my belly, dazed, crazed, and amazed
by the simple thought of u, the smell of u, even my thoughts of touching u
loving u is what i do, taking the time to be committed
elated and dedicated, love stoned as i emit
rays of sunshine from my eyes as i take u to cloud nine
with u is where i'll always be, we will stand the test of time

nervous as we speak, hold hands, and steal gentle kisses
afraid of bad outcomes as we talk about me being your mrs.
not caring as my love for u is completely unconditional
blase attitude towards others who find our love unconventional
fears erase as u reiterate u love me for being me
holding me close to your heart at night, peaceful in your arms while i sleep

the way i see u is indescribable, the words i say are undeniably real
what i'm trying to tell u, baby, the love i have i cannot conceal
for no words can ever amount to what i'm feeling inside
but words don't even matter cus with u is where i'll reside
i could've been real blunt and said "listen, baby, here's the deal"
but you're so eloquent and in this elegance it was relevant to tell u how i feel....
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Date Submitted: Apr 11, 2008 (01:39 AM)
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  Nae - Boo
04/19/08 (09:04 PM) 
Very nice poem i really love this

  NINO-G
04/12/08 (03:27 PM) 
Damn, gurl....Ifelt ALL the emotion in this piece. Real love exists...

  B. Rose
04/11/08 (04:08 PM) 
This was hot ou flowed very well with the pen...

  JTW_Thegreat
04/11/08 (04:53 AM) 
damn baby gurl very nice i like it

  FORESEER
04/11/08 (04:26 AM) 
AWW THIS IS SO PRECIOUS. YOU COULDNT HAVE SAID IT ANY BETTER. THIS WAS A VERY HEARTFELT AND SO FULL OF EMOTION. HE LUCKY GURL....LOL. OUTSTANDING.....10 STARS

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