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"FEELINGS FOR THIS GIRL"
  by YoungZurc
  - This Poem is a response to the poem feelings for this boy by BROKEN HEART


THERE IS THIS GIRL,
WHO HAS CAUGHT MY EYE...
REFER TO HER AS ANGEL,
WHENEVER SHE WALKS BY...... I DIE!!!!

IF NOT OUTTA MY LEAGUE,
THEN SHE'S OUTTA BOUNDS
HER BEAUTY MAKES ME NERVOUS,
I APPROACHED HER WITH MY HEAD DOWN...

"DAMN"....COULDN'T THINK OF ANY
OF MY CORNY PICK-UP LINES...
SO, I SAID "HI"
& WAS SUPRISED SHE EVEN REPLIED..

& PLUS I'M STILL ALIVE
THOUGHT IT WOULD'VE KILLED ME...
WORDS LEFT HER HER MOUTH & THEN
FILLED ME, WITH ALL KINDS OF DREAMS..

TO BAD IT ENDS THERE,
EVERYDAYS THE SAME,
A REOCCURING NIGHTMARE
TO SCARED TO ASK HER WHATS HER NAME..

UNTIL I TRY ANOTHER ANGLE,
I'LL KEEP CALLING HER ANGEL...
ONE DIE I'LL SHINE ON HER WRISTS
LIKE ONE OF HER GOLDEN BANGLES....



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Date Submitted: Jun 29, 2009 (02:50 PM)
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  BROKEN HEART
06/30/09 (09:19 PM) 
LOVE IT :) 10 STARZ

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