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"Feelings"
  by revolt


caressing the most intimate,

sexual,

sensual

places of your figure,

I figured mother nature broke and enhanced your double helix

and it's combo-nations with vigor,

she highlighted every square inch and curvature on the body of

my-goddess,

my-enchantress,

my-earthed fetal womb,

giver of DNA connections connected, unrejected, seminal backstroke perfected,

not frozen cold but warm and heat treated like the Serengeti sand dunes

consumed through passion,

the seed of our collision and bodily concessions,

I have a confession

that Love You,

Recalling I am not,

the emotional regressional states once perceived as mundane,

knowing it was the cause of confusion zigzagging throughout my being and brain,

I'll explain in plain English,

uncontained verbs, adjectives, pronouns, nouns and synonyms

used to profess my unspoken words,

it's obsurd, hinting to myself in confirming to the object of my affection,

that my affection has true distinct deep-rooted meaning,

my mind tussles in contradictions

pondering what you might think,

the meaning of the word,

world renowned in it's presence,

past and future tenses,

i sttt, sttt, stutter just to say

that I love you,

in nervousness I'm intranced,

hypnotized I close my eyes, trying ever so hard to seek, feel and see your soul,

forcing away all distractions, in a 360 degree peripheral,

attracting sensing your energy,

your cosmic karma,

and Electro-energized sensual arousing states,

should I reiterate, one more time and formulate in my lines,

that I love you,

visions of mass orgasmic erupted explosions

releasing pent up tensions,

forget protection and sexual prevention's

I have intentions of life long committed commencements,

at one time I emmitted my true heart felt,

unpresented were my feelings,

thinking you'd think only lustful desire was my direction,

but through close inspection and many erections later

I'm still here,

not going anywhere,

I really don't care for flash flooded warnings reported through propagated filled lines

as long as you know that

I love you

Enchanted I was, am and will always be,

for all eternity,

no other can turn my directives entirely,

I mentioned once, twice, three, four times before, that I love you

in un-measurable amounts,

not an existing or past existing mathematician can calculate the amount,

it's a mutual relative theory,

denser ever more powerful than gravity's pull,

pulling down desires

unfolding the most natural,

birth mother of the universe,

quencher of cravings,

sky written are those words in our sun stetted intimate heart housed horizons,

that I love you.

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Date Submitted: Nov 01, 2008 (09:58 PM)
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  kimmy_kim01
01/06/09 (07:55 PM) 
you have to quit!!!! heat sweat.. woman down ...woman in the stress .. you are a very very talented brother from the heart more then ten stars baby .. you keep writin' like this i will have to track you DOWN!!!! keep excellent writing going ...

  PhreeMiiSoul
12/26/08 (09:13 PM) 
wonderful way of expressing your emotions...wonder if she's gotten the chance to hear/read this...

  J@yBoogz••.•'¯...
12/02/08 (01:37 PM) 
"caressing the most intimate, sexual, sensual places of your figure, I figured mother nature broke and enhanced your double helix and it's combo-nations with vigor,"...
[+]more

  mrs pruitt
11/29/08 (10:57 AM) 
Beautifulllllll boo nice 100 all the way shout out to you n this a fave on my list keep it up

  RedLoveSong
11/20/08 (04:47 PM) 
wow...this was a beautiful expression of love...God bless your enchantress...

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