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"Field of Grains"
  by Ulises


In the fertile field of life
the crops of my future depend on the sunlight of my will,

In the rows of physical,spiritual and emotional vegetation,
I find that growth has haulted because of a lack of determination.




..Rain is necessary for a healthy harvest,
As it feeds,strengthens and nourishes the roots of knowledge
and wisdom,

Sun light is also vital as it radiates the soil with hope and shines joy
through the thickest of turmoils,

In the field of life
We all remain significant grains,
through heart ache and strain we bloom into precious beings,
that one day we will yield the ability to put to sleep all pain.
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Date Submitted: Nov 30, 2008 (12:28 AM)
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  da' hottest 10
12/22/08 (03:07 AM) 
good piece. it made me appreciate nature and people more

  11th Wonduh
12/18/08 (01:46 AM) 
philosophical pearls of wisdom being exhibited here. i enjoyed the middle half of this write simply cause it spoke the plain truth. overall a enjoyable read

  Noir
12/09/08 (05:29 PM) 
Yo this was beautiful. Sunlight of my will, that is a good way of showing how much just being determined means.

  unique1luv
12/02/08 (01:08 AM) 
I don't know what to say about this piece....

  Delores
12/01/08 (10:28 PM) 
i love how u took the analogy of fields of grain and turnd it n2 ur life. Meaningful and beautiful piece 10 keep writing

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