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"Fight"
  by LiquidFire
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Moon's Night by B. Rose


Light
Dark

Neither staying for long
Each betraying the other

The sun promised he'd stay
But then the moon said the same

And both fight for the existence of each other
In the realm of our being

The stars find it funny
And they snicker constantly
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Date Submitted: Oct 22, 2008 (11:54 AM)
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  Lyricsista
12/06/08 (02:25 PM) 
i like that! real nice right there! teach me! lol

  MzSpoon is bac...
10/22/08 (09:35 PM) 
Lovely and awh inspiring response. I see MJ taking a stab at something new, and I see you doing your thang. Thanks for this one.

  Blakfiya
10/22/08 (01:37 PM) 
wow...that last line...."constantly" = constellation - fire. Really added to B's piece and just was superbly done. Kudos.

  B. Rose
10/22/08 (12:00 PM) 
Haha... i like this one... ncie job...

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