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"FINE DIME"
  by kinnaird


"Fine Dime"


(louis): ayo fam, let me holla at you, tell u bout this chick i met,
we been talkn bout a week and i aint even stick it yet,
(kinnaird): WHAT!,
(louis): for real man, she the type i really wana kick it wit
(kinnaird): come on dog i know you, you the type to hit and quit the chick
(louis): naw, if this was a movie, i think im bout to flip the script,
(kinnaird): come on man be serious, all your life you been a pimp,
now you bout to give it all up from just a simple glimpse;
(louis): yeah man im serious, she driving me delirious, the end of my pimp days are over, period,
(kinnaird): well, let me tell you bout this chick i met, i met her in a book store,
she approached me and said "what can i help you look for"
(kinnaird): she gave me her number before she even let me speak,
and we been talkn on the phone now for atleast a week,
(louis): yeah man i hear you, the girl i got is fine dude,
(kinnaird): i understand what u sayn the girl i got a dime dude,
(louis): aiight man i hear you, its sort of like a double take,
(kinnaird): maybe me, you the girls, we can have a double date,
(louis): aiight man i feel you, let me call her on the phone,
(kinnaird): i'll do the same dog, let me call her at her home,
(louis): my girl intelligent with the body of a dancer,
im calln her up on the phone but i cant get no bleepn answer,
(kinnaird):just be patient, she'll call back when she see you seekn,
and for future references never use the word bleepn,
(louis): anyway, my girl fine dude, my girl fine dude, she got a nice body and she got a nice tone,
(kinnaird): ok you said that once, who are you now, mike jones,
(louis): aiight with the jokes, call your girl on the phone again,
and ima do the same, call my girl at home again,
(GIRL): I was in the shower baby when i heared the phone ringing, can you hold on Kinnaird, the phone to my home ringing,
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Date Submitted: Sep 30, 2008 (01:52 PM)
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  Candice STone
12/09/08 (03:18 PM) 
i liked this peice....i guess he wasn't the pimp he thought he was

  Suger
11/20/08 (02:43 PM) 
ooooooooooo baba beba!!!!!!! i had a feelin like somethin like this was gonna happen.... just waitin on the outcome of the script!!!1

  LyricalSista90...
10/12/08 (04:50 PM) 
This is EXCELLENT......I'm goin to read part 2 right now.

  Vocab Vixen ak...
10/10/08 (11:37 AM) 
Oooo.... Damn... is it what we think it gone be?... love how you tell a story n rhyme ya way through it... very nice

  Chocolate Suns...
10/09/08 (08:16 PM) 
I love it...this was geniuous. I love how creative you were...giving chance a chance and look what happens? !

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