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"Finger on the Trigger....KP picture challenge"
  by Jjonzzie


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Sometimes life is like a gun before you know it
your sitting holding the trigger hesitating to pull it
staring down the barrell, wondering if theres really a bullet
While the bullet sits in the chamber, egging you on
daring you...begging for you to pull the trigger
While in the mean time, your still tryna figure out
what the bigger picture is all about
your finger is still itching to pull the trigger
trying to be all grown up, before your time
3.5 kids, white picket fence, 5 bedroom house,
A lonely wine filled night, lights out
sitting in the dark, contemplating motives
how did you get here, knock knock......
Do you feel death's fear? Trigger cocked
Are you ready to face what's behind door number one?
"Click" You sigh your relife, but did you really believe
that life was a game show? Knock, Knock
Finger still itching, cocked back the glock
Time is ticking...TICK, TOCK, TICK, TOCK.
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Date Submitted: Aug 09, 2009 (07:33 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 08/09/09 (07:50 PM)
Author: Group: KINGPIN WRITERS
Poem Title: Trigger Finger...Kp ...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (3)
  Poetic Lyricis...
08/11/09 (09:25 AM) 
Whatever the challenge was about you had to knock it out of the box...I too can picture the visuals as I can feel the hesitation of the character in this piece...this was great Jj

  MR. BYRD
08/09/09 (08:30 PM) 
lol...wow...I mean that's the truth right there...I'm looking at this as if I'm really there, picturing out that scene....nice write on this challenge...keep it up sweetheart

  datboyjada
08/09/09 (08:15 PM) 
dis was nice as hell bae. it was on some movie type shit. i like dis.10

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