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"Firestarter"
  by Luvlee


I start fires its up to you to put them out
I don’t need no water because I thrive off of drought
I like the heat if you can’t stand it get out my kitchen
Because this lady will never bite her tongue or forget to make mention
What she’s feeling on the inside
Encountering this Diva is like a rollercoaster ride
And not one full of crazy whacked out emotions
But life lessons learned from mistakes and following false notions
This Lady has been created
To Worship
To Praise
To Raise up a generation that takes no mess
This Diva has been tried and has passed every test
Built to last
Yeah that’s me
See these are the things you discover when uncovering Luvlee to get to Ashley
I am She
My thoughts are not your thoughts and my thoughts are not Gods
But I know I was fearfully and wonderfully made
And to nonsense I give no shade
I bring the heat
You will feel the burn of my scorch
Jeremiah said it’s like fire
And that’s what my words bring
When I speak if you aren’t coming correct you will feel my sting
So get out of my way as I make a blaze along my path
And I don’t issue out I’m sorrys’ if you got singed by my fire the touch was meant to last
I repeat
I start fires its up to you to put them out
I don’t need no water because I thrive off of drought
I like the heat if you can’t stand it get out of my kitchen
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Date Submitted: Aug 21, 2009 (10:47 AM)
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  jargon
09/29/09 (01:49 PM) 
nice poem, very interesting, i like your mention of Jeremiah, and the confidence.

  thereelest
09/07/09 (12:30 AM) 
om-gosh. I read the first two lines over and over and over again. "i don't need no water because I thrive off of drought"...smh. why you always slappin' folks with truth? don't your hands hurt honey? lol. good piece gul.

  Advocate
09/03/09 (09:48 PM) 
i will say the flow was smoking, very commanding. it shows your confidence in not only your own efforts, but the effots of others that pass you by and are touched by your influence. the repetition from the first three lines to the end really drove in the impact of this piece's statement. excellent work.

  big josh
08/30/09 (03:19 PM) 
got damn this shit was sick luv, you bad azzgirl for reals

  ShannaxLove
08/28/09 (03:10 PM) 
GOT EM! this is strong and straight up in your face, i love it

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