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"First Love"
by Bum Bum
Drifting ... gently,
within the winds of time.
Having known her loves sweet caresses,
they are forever mine.
Her hands,
her lips,
did love inspire,
her every grace my heart did fire.
As her eyes begin to sparkle,
my emotions start to glow,
as if to suddenly realize,
a self I didn’t know.
Theres many kinds of love,
this we both agree,
But just the vibrance of her heart, .....
ads new mystery.
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Feb 04, 2008 (04:07 PM)
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COMMENTS (4)
love-is-the-li...
08/20/08 (03:40 PM)
nice work and i see where u r goin with this 10*s
lycric
08/07/08 (06:28 PM)
nice flow i gotta give you your props for this one you had me from begining to end so Good job Keep that pen moving Peace!
T Shyne
06/02/08 (02:33 PM)
i liked this tha lasst stanza really set this off fa me really good poem there is always somethin new to be found when ur inlove real hot peice famo 10 stars keep tha pen movin --T Shyne--
Jeffrey Jr.
04/18/08 (09:30 PM)
good
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