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"First Time"
  by Capricorn117


I'm so nervous, i mean its my first time
My heart beating fast am i really good wit mine?
Dont worry i'll be fine start off slow and proably end up fast
This is my fist time i hope it wont be my last

Well i have started and my hands are going right where i want them
So far so good i am doin better than everybody else and nim
I done got into a groove, and i anit stoppin for nothin
hitiing the sides, the front the back i anit missing nothin
I'm getting mored tired after every stroke
But i anit done yet i gone end on a good note

Finally done wit my first time now its time for the reaction
will i be sad or smile becuase of the satisfaction
Now i know its new to me and obvisuioly u can see
but please tell me how was my first time writing on GSPOETRY
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Date Submitted: Apr 13, 2007 (07:20 PM)
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  Lex Libra Baby...
01/18/09 (05:16 PM) 
Wow that was pretty creative. I liked it. I like poems that throw you off in the end.. hit you with the unexpected.. well like you said first time hope it wont be your last. Nice write.

  sexylexi
01/10/09 (09:09 PM) 
damn im really feelin u wit dis poem...its real and sexy....i likez...10*

  Lips
05/17/08 (05:31 PM) 
lol this was real clever and smooth, well your first time was good, hopefully you'll put someone more poems up

  Lady_T_09
02/17/08 (01:44 AM) 
this da kind of stuff that gets people raped!!! this is madd sexi. 10***

  miss chocolate...
02/10/08 (11:46 PM) 
lol you slow but i like it

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