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"Five Senses"
  by nieceyspeaks


let me see...
the vision of equality
the world of hipocracy
the reality of being

let me hear...
the sound affects of ur cool
the lies of ur self proclaimed truths
the music of ur heartbreak through dj booths

let me touch...
ur soft hands and ur dry ears
the roughness of ur skin
the wetness of ur tears

let me smell....
the scent of your life
the aroma of ur actions
the funk of ur fight

let me taste...
the sweetness of ur fingers
the sourness of ur love
ur bittersweet reactions that excites my taste buds

i want to try all my senses with u...
the good the bad.. i hope u feel the same way too
with u my senses arise
u open up my nostrils, u open my eyes
my ears are open to everything u say
my heart feels so good..
i never felt this way
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Date Submitted: Nov 23, 2008 (12:36 AM)
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  LADY*FAVORED*
12/20/08 (11:38 PM) 
very creative girl! very different from what u usually do. nice!

  mikeb30
12/02/08 (12:48 AM) 
this flow is appreciated..def painted a vivid pic w/this one...

  Ms. Smith
12/01/08 (01:33 AM) 
I love your concept...i loved where you took it. it was a good write. keep it up

  Mz. Lyric
11/30/08 (08:48 PM) 
LOVE THE CONCEPT! U REALLY DID UR THANG ON THIS ONE! VERY NICE AND SMOOTH!

  MAVRICK
11/26/08 (08:44 AM) 
i like the flow and smooth feel to this write...very sensual, stylish and creative...nicely done

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