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"flatline heartbeat"
  by ghettoholidai90


i livin on a flatline heartbeat
half dead livin life to the dummers beats
livin for my endless summer
where everything stand tall
but always afraid fall is upon us
cold heart tellin me the winter comin
as my heart gets cold
things get old
and relationship become froze
im jus in my winter wonder land
but im scared of my curiousity of how long it expand
fearful of it never havin a end
all alone so gone not even a friend
an enemy an peer or associate
feelin so misfit my armor aint appropriate
in a tank top and baggy jeans
im wonderin how cold it can get
i swear it feel lik my heart is what its lik for hell to freeze over
the deceit and the lies made my system
solar
slower
and got me feelin so polar
soon everything gone stop but time and i know it
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Date Submitted: Sep 09, 2009 (04:36 PM)
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  Ms. Hollywood
09/22/09 (12:42 PM) 
excellent piece! you is killing this shit for real! hate the feeling of being alone... when you feel by yourself, aint not telling what could happen.

  BlaqueRhose7
09/10/09 (02:58 PM) 
Deeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep words my dude, keep it flowing, ten stars

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