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"Flaws and all (please forgive me)"
  by NICKY BOO


Dear lord,

I come to you first and above all,
Because you are the one who can change me flaws and all,
Im sorry for disobeying you at times,
For I am just a human created without a perfect mind,
Forgive me and my sins, please im on my knees,
Help me to convert my flaws into positve personalities.
I make mistakes everyday,
Trying to find my way through this thing called life,
But only you can help me restore inside.

~A fallen angels prayer~

Mother,
I know I dont always make it easy on you,
And I may upset you, by somethings I do,
But you love me, unconditonally,
Every flaw that I have, you still see faith in me,
You remind me I can change, you make me believe,
All the flaws that I reveal, you see potential in me.
Please forgive me, I love you
~Your babygirl~


My love,
Now where do I began?
I understand I disapoint you sometimes,
I can an attitude with at the drop of of dime,
But deep down you know how much I care,
Thats why your still here, and I'll always be there,
Please forgive for some of the future mistakes,
I need you in my life, so I'll do whatever it takes.
~Your cakes~

To every one in my life,
As you may know im sorta fragile inside,
Sometimes I may get a little insane,
But no matter what, my love will remain the same,
I wanna thank for loving me, along with my flaws.

~Except me flaws and all~

Flaws And All - Beyonc?
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Date Submitted: Sep 20, 2008 (11:48 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 10/20/08 (12:34 AM)
Author: BrokenHearted 321
Poem Title: All My Flaws

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comment icon  COMMENTS (9)
  edeezy
10/20/08 (12:55 AM) 
this was pretty and i feel it *except me flaws and all*

  daidai_dts4l
09/21/08 (04:06 PM) 
this was beautiful aaw u make me wana find u an give u a big ass hug :]

  MyMy013
09/21/08 (03:19 PM) 
i love thisz write i love how u wrote a different letter to all the different ppl including our higher being the heavenly father 10 starz n a fav

  getchamndrite
09/21/08 (02:23 PM) 
this was deep..showed the beauty of ur soul on this no lie..very mature of you to take stock..and very creative to write it like you did. i think its the flaws that make us beautiful

  leezymleezy
09/20/08 (06:42 PM) 
aw how "normal" of you.....and the song DOES work....itz yo slow asz computer...lol

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