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"Flesh By The Pound"
  by BlessedOne
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Crimson Romance by Ahavayah


Many deny that it is an addiction
Refusing to acknowledge the affliction
That this embodied obsession brings
Not realizing that it can be a deadly thing
If it looks like an addition and quacks
Why is it not considered as lethal as crack?
You can usually find it after hours in the business section of town
Deals to fulfill are advertised all around
The ideal component is generally about 130lbs
The desire for it has destroyed may lives
Husband have lost more than just their wives
The disease element has taken many lives
Just like with other addictions
There is a treatment
There is help
The complexity of it is
What many do not wish to accept


Scenario 2000 (Jigga My N**** Remix) (Instrumetnal) - Eve/DMX/Jadakiss/Sheek Louch/Swizz Beatz
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Date Submitted: Dec 02, 2008 (03:05 AM)
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  K.A.S. THE LYR...
12/04/08 (06:04 PM) 
good write...some guys think its cool to go out and get their needs or wants in that manner....but like you are pointing out.."There is help The complexity of it is What many do not wish to accept ".....until they receive something they don't want or can't get rid of...10

  Ordained Misfi...
12/04/08 (10:34 AM) 
Oh yes... tis an addiction, ignored by many, suffered by most... that's wild

  TendaRoni
12/03/08 (04:21 AM) 
hmm...i read this twice to fully grasp what you were saying here and my interpretation was prostitution...or a sex addiction *tilts head* going by that alone to be honest with you i was only aware of it as an addiction that is medically/psychiatrically treated when i watched a movie. I was blown away like- people are actually coming out and admitting to it. Hey, big up for anyone that can admit to wrong/disruption but it is just another reminder of the immorality that encases this world. I'm not...
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  RedLoveSong
12/02/08 (09:49 PM) 
"The disease element has taken many lives." Wow, and still some people are still addicted...great piece.

  Magic101
12/02/08 (04:49 PM) 
very hot response! so tru... there are help and treatment for the addiction... and itz up to them to make that move. very well expressed. 10 starz

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