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"FLOW"
  by Mz Sick Prose


Ok
So
Here
It
Goes
Another poem that escaped from the hole in my soul
That
Time
After
Time
I have
Tried
To
Patch
But every time I cry a tear flows through a crack
Like a river abruptly flowing through a broken dam
And
Damn
This is not how I want my prose to be
And this is not how I want you to remember me
Cause
I
Am
Broken
And
Every now and then escapes a painful emotion
And
I try to push it back to that hole in my soul
And I try to disguise it so that no one knows
So
Here
It
Goes
I’m sorry if I wasted your time
And
Im sorry if Im a little off in my rhyme
But
Im a little off in my mind
So
Here
It
Goes
This
Is
The
Flow
Of
A
Broken
Soul

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Date Submitted: Mar 08, 2008 (10:13 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 03/09/08 (03:11 PM)
Author: S.L.P.
Poem Title: ++flow++

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comment icon  COMMENTS (8)
  BabiGurl01
04/16/08 (02:56 PM) 
this is a really good poem u no how to tell your feelings in a good what and that is great keep your head up high and keep writing great poems like this one 10 stars

  ~MISSTHANG~
04/01/08 (12:02 AM) 
I LOVE THIS 1! 10

  williesidney
03/22/08 (03:10 AM) 
Wow you have your on way in writting you are good and always use that gift that God has given you ten stars.

  LiquidFire
03/09/08 (07:49 PM) 
Marvelous. Simply divine. It juz goes to show that a little of our soul escapes to reveal itself to the world. Diggin thiz 100! Much love. Peace.

  .Candice.Renee...
03/09/08 (04:24 PM) 
and it was so damn good.... sometimes the best poems come from the moments where you doubt... lord knows I read this out loud just to get the feel of it and it was something that you can SURELY soulcast. this was basically sickening and soul bearing at the same time.

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