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"Flowing Freely"
  by BrEeZyWrOtE


Tears…
each drop lingers on my face
dribbling down to an unknown space
flowing like streams
rooted from my soul
wandering out into the cold…
you left me high and dry when I needed you here
you said you\'d never leave and have no fear.
It\'s just weird how I fell for your lines
it seemed like they got me every time .
Freely flowing
my emotions pierce your back
after all that\'s the image I have left.
What happened to the promises you made to me
it\'s just a shame that you could blatantly abandon me for she
who doesn\'t know you like I do
how could you ever think she could love you better than I do?
Buts cool.
I see how replaceable I am
but funny thing is how when you left back you quickly ran.
Let me remind you I am irreplaceable
a sign of doubt in my confidence is untraceable.
I am crying my eyes out because I feel so dumb
because I let my emotions flow so strongly I feel like you won
this fight over my heart and it will never be returned
yet and still there is a lesson that has yet to be learned.
So I\'ll let these streams of passion sweep away my heartache with time
thenmaybe later one day I\'ll someone who will be mine.
Until that happens I have emotions will continue to expel
flowing freely as the current of the waterfall of tears
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Date Submitted: Oct 26, 2009 (06:28 PM)
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  Silk305
10/29/09 (06:13 AM) 
Raw emotions were expressed... your words you poured out on paper in "ink" were immpeccable. There were no boundaries within this write... you let it all out with nothing but passion. Great write... 10.

  MR.INTUITIVE
10/27/09 (06:07 AM) 
wow again i had to read this piece again its just that brilliant.breezy wrote got flow!!!

  W_J_lyriC
10/26/09 (10:22 PM) 
Very well done, very emotional you let heart pour onto the paper flooding it with your pain. Very good piece, keep it up I\'m looking forward to hearing more from you.

  MR.INTUITIVE
10/26/09 (08:32 PM) 
this was an emotional piece for me to read but it was great.keep up the great work

  geel
10/26/09 (06:39 PM) 
ur are irreplaceable...beautiful heartfelt write and i luv it breezy...keep writing sweetie

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