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"Focal Point: You"
  by prince charming


I did everything to love you the best way that i can
no matter how difficult the task at hand

every obstacle i faced, i overcame
each being more or less the same
ever since you came
my consciousness became a game

each level i emerge the victor, bringing me closer to your love
a precious gift that God, himself, made from the unknown heavens above

its your love that im willing to strive for
for you i'll be persistent even when my body is sore
for you i will love
its you i'll never get tired of

because of you the foundation of my future seems bright
when all feels wrong, you have the tendency to make things feel so right

being with you is like submitting the white flag of truce
forfeiting the war and keeping the love on the battlefield loose

for you i am complete
with you my heart never sleeps
without you my heart weeps
without you i am incomplete
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Date Submitted: Nov 05, 2009 (01:49 AM)
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  brownsista
11/05/09 (08:48 PM) 
Awwwww this bout to bring me to tears sweet poem

  dagirl2fly4hat...
11/05/09 (08:47 PM) 
Awww this was deep.... keep that pen truckin....

  ToCute4U
11/05/09 (08:44 PM) 
You poured your heart out into this write, and I felt it as you were speaking to your readers man this is something else so deep and very emotional. Keep it flowing.

  Moey
11/05/09 (03:02 PM) 
very strong, very nice. i enjoyed reading this.

  Flowet
11/05/09 (01:53 PM) 
subliminal mesage at work in one of the comments just thought i should throw that out there before commenting on this piece...anyway i like your flow it's easy it doesn't force it's self on the reader and the i like how you expressed your undying love for who you speak of but i'm sure you can express your emotions toward them in a write further into the rabbit hole than this not saying it's a bad write but not to sugar coat it it seems as though you can do better whether microscopic or gargantua...
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