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"Fog out my window"
  by shawn da 1


Staring through a foggy window and realizing that I can't see,

This is different from a "Dark window reflection", but it's kind of creepy,

There is no sight for me to see because my mind is clouded by forces which shouldn't exist to be,

Constant distractions keep my mind from connecting to my heart,

Letting my heart do to much my brain couldn't focus for the part,

The paths for my synapses are now open and clear,

The fog on the other hand will not disappear,

A problem in life is we can't identify the cause so we can't act on the means,

So we do the wrong thing and have to learn from our past,

Realizing this now I saw a car lights pass...

My window is clearing but still I cannot see,
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Date Submitted: Jan 11, 2008 (11:02 PM)
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  AR-15
01/23/08 (05:11 PM) 
Those are some deep words, my brother "My window is clearing but I still cannot see" loved how you made that the closing line". Takes you mind different places. Another 10 star write. Keep doin it

  Baby Gina
01/14/08 (10:12 PM) 
datsz deep 4real

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