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"following up"
by B.R
- This Poem is a response to the poem FAT BITCH GONE WILD by HE GOT SEAWEED GROWIN ON ...

use a fake bitch...u right for comments..u a poetry actor
lemme bust on ya page..use em for hair relaxer
brush ya comments off my page..ya voice don't matter
shed a hoe..dice ya up..making poetry batter
on goob shyt..I brough em up..u just on his saddle
u a immature where da fuck ya baby rattle
I wrote a diss on u then ya go run n tattle
dis is too easy..im not even doing a battle
u a comment whore..prb got n A in drama class
I would rather keep it real..but ya made me diss ya ass
and maybe perhaps
this shyt cud act as rehab
becuz im sure..ude hate to relaspe
neva see a poetry postitute..with poetry crabs
so put that n ya dead fish seaweed carcus bath

aha shawti pissed ya she can't diss..u spittin but it looks worse then period piss..uz a dumb chic...period..bitch

hmmmm...continue or let it go......fuck it aha

relax stop leaving all the comments..write back
im hungry for a weak diss..feed me a small snack
ya can't write shyt so ya no ya can't rap
junkyard bitch found her yards with my scraps
tuck ya in with the straps
buckle up buckle up...dice ya like craps
now hope ya happy.with this relation attack
stopp running ya mouth..for I hit ya ass back
run cirlces round ya ass while u froze on da track
diss them I diss u..dumb chic do the math

Date Submitted: Jul 24, 2008 (05:32 PM)

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COMMENTS (7)

Shaboogie

07/25/08 (11:40 AM)

wow this was hardand would be hot had your girl penned it!u coming at a female do u not realize that?you type in ebonics , that doesn't help either. This is a poetry website not a rap battle website.ENOUGH ALREADY!! HIS SHIT IS NOT EVEN POETRY!!

...Da RiDdLeR ...

07/25/08 (09:06 AM)

Seriously every fight is NOT a good fight to get into & futhermore taking shots @ women when you were not targeted..bad look..

**HOLLA**

07/24/08 (07:44 PM)

BR, I PAID NO MIND TO YOU BEFORE BECAUSE IT WASN'T EVEN WORTH A COMMENT, BUT SERIOUSLY DUDE, YOU ARE AS LAME AS THEY COME, I HAD RESPECT FOR YOU FOR HOLDING DOWN YOUR OWN AS A NEWBIE, BUT EVEN THEN I QUESTIONED IT BECAUSE YOU ONLY GOT YOUR FAME BY TRYING TO DISS SOMEONE... THIS RIGHT HERE IS SO UNCALLED FOR, FIRST OF ALL, A BIG RULE IS... LET THE MEN HANDLE THEIR BUSINESS LIKE MEN AND LET THE BITCHES HANDLE THEIR BUSINESS LIKE BITCHES, I CAN NOT BELIEVE YOU ARE BREAKING BRAIN CELLS TRYNA DEFEND ...
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D.O.X.

07/24/08 (05:55 PM)

oh wow.....but uhmmm....i hope u know that the piece that u were respondin to...was for somebody completely different...man this situation is goin on for too long....why dont yall just hate each other & be done with it?

ASympl3Diamond

07/24/08 (05:42 PM)

AND GO CALL DOMINICAN SO SHE CAN COME AND RATE YO TRASH!!!!!

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