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"For ever"
  by One


Now...

that I'm
in love with you
I'm e specially sir prized
emotionally I've even realized
I've never been a make pretend
personality at this or any other time
too often I'm too busy perfecting
Im perfections with
in my life

...Loving

You with
out any strings
attached to
baby I'll baby,
baby you

You're...

...So

Goddamned...

...Beautiful

Always
empress you're
singing in presses
sure points, Im pacting
passionately satisfying things
meaning while we smile
pre dicting being
wings

...About

pos
sibilities
we can't do
with
out

For ever


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Date Submitted: Sep 29, 2008 (10:46 AM)
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  RUBY RED DBL R
10/02/08 (10:25 AM) 
damn this is hot yo, i really love the wordplay and expressiveness in the flow...... that woman is very lucky, no guy ever told me let alone wrote some shit that sound like this------emotionally I've even realized I've never been a make pretend personality at this or any other time too often I'm too busy perfecting Im perfections with in my life----- wow one would you marry me???? *throws up* i take that back nice poem though

  *Miss Toya*
10/02/08 (10:14 AM) 
OMG...wow...how did i miss this one one...so beautiful....if ever i needed to read a love poem today it was this one...can't even quote this poem is so beuatiful a fav....

  ASympl3Diamond
09/30/08 (06:11 PM) 
"I've never been a make pretend personality at this or any other time too often I'm too busy perfecting Im perfections with in my life"----thats always me right there too!!! *deep sigh* im loving the background very beautiful view of the clear waters brushing up on the shore..nice

  Soul Lyrikal
09/30/08 (11:50 AM) 
Very clever...I love the letter separating..double meaning, abstract art in Jamaica...Hell I felt like Stella reading this poem! Being all Romantical!

  Blaqmermaid
09/30/08 (10:16 AM) 
Sounds like someone's been bitten by the love bug. Congrats homie. Question about the decision to separate e specially sir... What prompted this? Cool piece. So much for you wanting to be emotionally detached from your work huh? LOL

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