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"FOR HER...(iM SORRY)"
  by DaDutchezz


where to begin...
i dnt kno if i have time..
to fit in everything i need to say...

im sorry to never saying the rite thing...
im sorry i make you worry...
im not goin nowhere...
if anywhere it would be in your
arms you already know
again...
im sorry for the "bad seeds" that rooted
but im tryn get you to see...
when im planted in spring
ill bloom all year round
and not fade whent first frost hits
the ground....
them ugly shades of blacks and browns
wnt fade my beauty in the fall
so ill be your eternal rose
for all season...
wnt die off for any reason...
i promise...

im sorry that i ask dumb questions...
im sorry i question my beauty
to you...
im sorry my voice gets all squeaky when im exicted...
im sorry i always call when ur workin...

for "her"
my...
Human
Equivalent to
Rays blessed upone me by the sun...
i, too, am sick of the heartache,
heartbreak...
the make ups...to turn around
and break up...
t, too, want eternal sunshine
with no thunder clouds...
im
Selfish
Open minded
Realizing that
Reality is
Yet to be real...

im sorry that i wish i had you
all to myself...
im sorry all those otha brawds made
ya hear melt
and left you drowing in a sea of
sorrows and sorries...
let me be that Baywatch chick
that comes to your rescue
when your stranded at sea...

better yet let me take your place
so i can simply drown in a sea of
Heavenly
Excrutiating
Rapture
that is you....

im sorry for my sorries...
im sorry for OUR sorrows...

for her....

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Date Submitted: Jan 30, 2008 (05:59 PM)
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  WriteItDown
02/07/08 (08:52 PM) 
U have a unique way of writing. You seem to incorporate an acrostic style into all of your poems (at least the ones I've read so day) which is great to me because it creates a better sense of imagining and seeing exactly what it is you are writing bout. I can digg it. Keep em coming! 10

  THE GOD WAR-CL...
02/07/08 (06:17 AM) 
WOW. LOVING YOUR STYLE.THIS IS A VERY COMPASSIONATE POEM. I CAN FEEL YOUR EMOTIONS FLOWING ALL THROUGHOUT THIS MASTERPIECE. I WISH I HAD ENOUGHT TIME TO SAY SORRY TO ALL THOSE I'VE HURT. MAYBE IN DUE TIME. ANYWAY......GOOD JOB. 10 STARS.....

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