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"For the Better..."
  by rhythmicsoul


When the expectation of...
was at its least
you stepped in my life...
and relieved it of all its grief
We fit perfectly ...
and the world was as it should be
Love of my life gave me sight but u were all i chose to see

Because of you my life has changed for the better
Love and happiness are no longer my heart's fair weather
instead of the now my vision is set ahead to our future
but overnight, much like the rest...
The vision of a superman turned into lex luther

Days turned into weeks...
and a single conversation became our peek
Funny how weeks turned into months when life was peach...
But that was when we thought we had a love we could preach

Because of you my life has changed for the better
From you, my love, i got...
No call
No text
or dear john letter...
Up untill now you have been the best ever
But with that said I know i still deserve better

When the expectation of...
was at its least
you stepped in my life ...
but your stay was brief
We fit perfectly...
and the world was as it should be
Love of my life took my sight now im blinded to the blessings around me

What was takin by those before,
you restored...
Only to take that, thensome and more
I now, a lifeless, loveless, heartbroken shell...
Find it hard to believe in a heaven while here in hell
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Date Submitted: Feb 07, 2009 (05:17 AM)
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  Μz Ρ...
05/06/09 (04:16 AM) 
Whoa what a deep scribe ..nicely written A bitter sweet pain! embrace ure emotions its essential so when real love bites ya u know xxxxx

  *~Raw Sensuali...
02/10/09 (05:58 PM) 
oh MY....this is so beautiful... if this is reality... then the one will come to spread sunshine on you...and you will feel the warmth ... and your sight will return... and if this IS not reality... you put me so deep inside of your words I felt your excitement AND your pain.

  RedLoveSong
02/10/09 (05:28 PM) 
Deep and emotional piece...you do deserve better and better will come...just have faith...

  Paralyzed
02/07/09 (03:40 PM) 
NIce read

  BlessedOne
02/07/09 (03:28 PM) 
There is much I see in your words. I see hurt, but no malice. I also see an appreciation, but the desire for something better. Thanks for the thoughts.

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