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"For the Rest of My Life"
  by Pip


{Once I got goin with this I couldnt stop... I hope it doesn't shound cheesey, please let me know what you think}

I need you to be mine
For the rest of my life
Here by my side
If you give me the chance I know I could trust you
I refuse to be denied

I need you to be mine
For the rest of my life
Here by my side
You never seemed to mind
So kind letting me confide

I need you to be mine
For the rest of my life
Here by my side
I need you back in my life baby please
You have no idea how many tears i've cried

I need you to be mine
For the rest of my life
Here by my side
I wanna hear you say I love you again
I'll be waiting until you decide

I need you to be mine
For the rest of my life
Here by my side
Can't you please swallow your damn pride
These feelings refuse to hide

Then on that horrible day
You didnt know what to say
So with a quick goodbye you were out the door
You left me wanting sooo much more

I need you to be mine
For the rest of my life
Here by my side
Even if you dont ask me to be your bride
At least we can say we tried!

I guess this is what happens when to broken hearts collide!
So please Baby
Look me in the eyes and say:
I need you to be mine
For the rest of my life
Here by my side
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Date Submitted: Mar 30, 2008 (10:17 PM)
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  *{Lil' Hustla}...
06/16/08 (11:10 PM) 
KEEP IT UP I AIN'T LYEING I WILL LOOK AT THE AT THE VERY TOP

  luckycharms
05/10/08 (11:19 PM) 
AWWW I soo love this one I can relate, because I lost mine too..lol Nice one though! 10STARZZZ.... Also going on my fave.

  j3rni
05/10/08 (10:07 PM) 
u got alot of talent. keep it up

  cocoaprincezz
05/10/08 (09:50 PM) 
ma dis definatley aint cheezy? what you thinkin? dis is beautiful, keep up trhe gud work. 10 stars.

  Crazy Baby
04/27/08 (10:47 PM) 
its deff not cheesy i like how you repete the first few lines of the stanza it lets you make your point really clear

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