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"Forbbiden Temptation"
  by Sunshine ebony10290


Trying to resist her,
I can't get enough,
The scent of her perfume teases my nose,
I can still taste her lips on my tounge,
The way her lips felt against mine
Gave me tremors up and down my spine,
I'm just so curious,
The way she stares at me,
The way I stare back,
She's got me hooked on her,
Like an addiction to crack,
A sacred secret between us,
Having animal like lust,
As much as we try to fight it,
As much as we try to hide,
As she tastes the nectar of my forbbiden fruit,
As I embrace my lips in her breast,
When we reach our heights of passion,
We know after our encounter we must separate,
For this is our forbbiden temptation..........
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Date Submitted: Jan 14, 2009 (03:59 PM)
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  Embonpoint
05/26/09 (05:07 PM) 
Forbidden makes the desire soo much more immediate! Don't I know! Nicely Penned Ma! Only 18, damn I wish I was strong in the mentals like you at 18.

  B Dub S
05/21/09 (05:12 PM) 
Curiousity killed the cat or did it....lol ....loving the write. I like the slight variation in style. Surprised that you are hitting it so hard at 18 yrs old. I'm kinda jealous. At 18, I couldn't write a poem to save my life.

  Dana Dane... M...
05/08/09 (02:16 PM) 
Mmm wow! Sounds like a very sexy encounter... the fact that its so taboo... makes that much more exciting in my opinion.

  DeepThinker7
03/26/09 (11:13 PM) 
For it to be so forbbiden, the depth is purely intoxicating and draws even the conversate sensual being to a state of warm, zealous delight. I like your hestiant but observantly approving style in this write.

  JQ_aka_Tigger
01/14/09 (08:39 PM) 
i wish you would've done a female outlook. i would've ha a comeback for it. lol. still its a good write though. needs more imagery. its a fav.

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