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"Forever Gone"
  by Miss Self Sufficient


I clearly remember the day you left
You caught a case like you commited theft
My heart you took, and broke in half
And from a distance all you did was laugh.

I can never forget the tears that fell
The pain you caused like if it was hell
Time heals all wounds so they say
But my path you will cross one day!

I must admit i was a fool
You treated me like a garden tool
Your love one day will be replaced
Cause everyone knows being with you was a waste.

You see me now, you stop and stare
You missing the love, and how i once cared
Take care NOW, must move on
The love we had is forever gone.
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Date Submitted: Nov 06, 2008 (01:10 PM)
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  touchdapearl2
12/04/08 (05:58 PM) 
Dam...i see ur a straight forward life writer like myself! this was another fiya piece

  PHILLY PRINCEZ...
11/21/08 (07:30 PM) 
There go that "garden tool" again lol, i liked it 10 stars ma

  Hank
11/09/08 (10:00 PM) 
Not bad. He'll be back what goes around comes around. Why he'd leave someone as beautiful as you is beyond me.

  Fresh Roughex
11/06/08 (05:52 PM) 
move on sister! this is nice

  TWANGINU
11/06/08 (04:41 PM) 
VERY GOOD.NICE WRITE.THATS HOW YOU TAKE CARE OF THAT PROBLEM.KEEP YOUR HEAD UP.10 STARS

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