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"Forever Inside"
  by Slatz


It tortures me, it teases me;
Fucking with me constantly.
Why can’t it leave me alone?
But this is all I’ve ever known.
It couldn’t possibly be kind,
My happiness was turned askew.
It was all in my mind
But that’s all I ever knew.
It won’t ever go away;
The source of my dismay.
Forever inside of me,
Something I will never see.
Why must it be
That my own mind fucks with me?

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Date Submitted: Oct 09, 2008 (06:35 AM)
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  Reicee
10/21/08 (04:09 PM) 
NICE WRITE....short but definately to the point...10strz

  Teonna R.
10/20/08 (09:48 PM) 
I didnt expect the ending...it was short, sweet and to the point. Kudos.

  Ryter
10/20/08 (09:14 PM) 
Did not expect that but it was beyound great! I feel like that a lot. You're supposed to be able to control your thoughts, but sometimes they take over and won't leave you alone...I sound psychotic but it's true sometimes. Anyway lovin this:)

  Dre'
10/20/08 (06:29 PM) 
Good stuff.....really diggin this poem.. So expressive. Keep the pen to the pad.....I understand

  Ice_Llama
10/20/08 (08:37 AM) 
Goog write brother......my mind fucks with me all the time also.....why must it be?

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