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"FOREVER"
  by BMSN
  - This Poem is a response to the poem MY FIRST NIGHT by BRANNU


Has god cursed me
Then why
Why must I continue to hit
Rob
Deprive you of your glory
Why must I savagely use
And mistreat the secrets you share
With me
You don't want to give it
But I take it anyway
You slave
And you pray
And you get left with
Nothing
Wanting
Waiting to run away
Maybe in the arms
Of another may you no find
Me
But does it bother me
No
God
Has foresaken my soul
I have no emotion
No feeling
You are the closest thing I have to
Humanity
So for now
I will continue to love you
The only way I know how.....
Not at all
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Date Submitted: Aug 29, 2009 (10:58 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (7)
  Μz Ρ...
09/22/09 (03:51 PM) 
Catching write and the final bang was something ..so thought provoking. Men will love the only way they know how xx

  bRo0kLyN BaYbE...
09/22/09 (02:42 PM) 
W0W THIS WAS DEEP AS HELL . . . P0WERFUL T00 SHYT. . . IM REALLY FEELIN THIS. . . I GIVE Y0U MA PR0PS. . . KEEP IT UP. . . .10'SZ

  BlaqueRhose7
09/18/09 (12:29 PM) 
More talent in VA... Thats whats up... I'm feeling this, the ending got me but thats all the more reason i like it, keep it flowing

  Moni J
09/17/09 (10:02 AM) 
love it. i really enjoyed the ending..."i will continue to love you the only way i know how ...not at all." very nice rite.

  Myka W.
09/17/09 (01:03 AM) 
Wow... That ending through me for a loop... Loved it!

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