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"forgiveness"
  by ARCH ANGEL
  - This Poem is a response to the poem i'm sorry by harley quinn/a fallen ang...


*I dnt know if that was for me but I'm responding like it was*

Nothing can compare to the pain I've felt
When u just up and walked away
I gave you my love breath and life itself
But it seems I now die in vein

I chased you across the universe
And gave u worlds unfound
Only to wake up one gloomy morning
To see you weren't around

Hearing your voices in my dreams
Should I overdose to meet with you
Because you won't even talk to me
And I just wish to speak to you

I forgive you for running away from me
I guess karma played its role
Wishing you would return to me
So that my heart wud again be whole

It seems you've loved anew
And I'm left to watch from afar
Lord take me in the night
Its my only wish upon her falling star

So ill fade to black
Because it seems its what you want
At least when I think of u
Ill thnk of when I was happy once
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Date Submitted: Oct 13, 2009 (10:59 PM)
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  smooch
10/14/09 (08:32 PM) 
damn this was deep and beautiful love it worth reading again def a fav

  KiNg-Go0B3r
10/14/09 (06:32 PM) 
damn man...this is sad bruh...keep ya head, n u aint lost a step

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