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"freak1#"
  by JAJA12
  - This Poem is a response to the poem make u cum by the_millest_reallest


boy you said that you would make me cum
and i did
but that was only once if you want the recognition
try about six other position
how about the one where my legs up by head
and your poundin my shit against the bed
or the one where i face you
and ride you like a true freak do
or maybe i'll let you get a taste if
you know how to do it rite
do it like
spread my lips and put yours in
flick your tongue on my pleasure pen
don't say your tired
so much still left to do
how about when we 69 and i pleasure you
let you shiver with pleasure
and let me please
i'll suck you closer so i can taste
you
i don't like bitter sweet
so boy you better taste like candy
i know you're tired
don't worry we're almost through
yea you made me come
but this freak is still 1#

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Date Submitted: Aug 30, 2007 (07:51 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (2)
Date: 02/21/08 (03:06 PM)
Author: letmesaymmmm
Poem Title: i .. u ....

Date: 12/28/07 (03:58 AM)
Author: THA M-F GUY
Poem Title: LONG STROKIN DEEP POKIN

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comment icon  COMMENTS (49)
  slow boogie100...
10/13/09 (02:22 AM) 
good shit,you covered all the grounds, shiid i was lookin for more...nice write

  Droe88
09/13/09 (03:18 PM) 
you so nasty!!!...lmao.. i dont thing theres a man on da planet that wouldnt enjoy reading this...lol great write...and if you dont mind check out my colabo poem when tru freaks do things.. i think that you may enjoy!!

  (Floetic~One) ...
08/21/09 (10:05 PM) 
wow this iz a very hot classic... your flow was pure fiyah... keep doin your thing. 10 starz

  StraY12
06/26/09 (05:55 PM) 
I'm feelin' this your visuals is nice wile keepin' the tempo to the beat at the same time...well the way I read it either way you held your own provin' the title wasn't just a title...I'm feelin 'the style in this tho' you are trully in touch with your freaky nature! nice!

  Mr sexual4evas...
06/22/09 (03:51 PM) 
now i see y more than 1 person had to repond... it made me want to respond... lol good shit sexxxi!!! damn good shit!!!

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