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"Freaky real shit"
  by TY-31558


Excuse me! How you doing..I mean this may come off alittle brash...............but can I make love to you, whoa whoa whoa whoa whoaa! Yeah I know its alittle brash, but its something in this moment that makes me want to tap that ass. I mean..you walk with such confidence..demanding all attention, oh and I cant forget to mention that your eyes are captivating. Your mocha brown skin soothes me like a starbucks frappacino in winter, you shade all sun spots like a solar eclipse, and your lips drive me crazy. And yes you can call me strange..but baby your swagga is off the charts, . So can I make love to you. Not all fast like im in a rush, because believe me this is not just some random fuck. I wanna take my time with you til your body flinches in pleasure from the slow and steady strokes of my rod! Speed it up..slow it down..move it around and around up and down, in a random array of spontaneous movement to keep you guessing, steady yes-ing to my mannish questions like..do you like daddy's dick, and you gone clean the house...you gone get up and make me some tacos..pick up all the damn toys..shit that dont mean a damn thing..i just got that from my favorite movie baby boy. Girl this is far from a game, I wanna make love to you in frames, in front of a mirror, because its something about that arch in a womens back after she straddles that owee goowee goodness across my lap..taking me to heaven as she inserts my controller into her play-station and begins to slow grind for me..like an r kelly song..except no video tapes unless you like that freaky shit. Cuz I come equipped for any moment. Again, I know this has got you juggling with your morales because you dont want to feel like a hoe..sleep with a brother that have yet to know..to his house you must go..so he can caress your body. Baby if your not a hoe, you want be treated like one..we'll do it your way..all day, all night foreplay to get you ready to rock steady to the music I wanna make with you..your moans in c major hitting me in a sultry alto, and my tenor harmonizes our efforts to come. I couldnt allow you to just pass me, leaving me in regret..what if I woulda, and than she woulda...This is just me being real...so if your down im down to put in work. Give me a call at this number here..and have no fear...because you are more than taken care of.
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Date Submitted: Sep 17, 2008 (11:23 PM)
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  LisaBaybie
10/09/08 (11:30 AM) 
dis is the shit you got mad skills papi...keep em comming i want to read more and talk more with u

  mz_April
09/30/08 (02:51 AM) 
damn im feeling this write this is hot like fyre i lobve it 10 starzz keep ya pen hand strong babe!

  ButterflyDream
09/30/08 (02:10 AM) 
WHEW....that was hot and brash,lol but you still did it with class.what can I say I"m loving this as well.

  P03tIC@LLY SK!...
09/29/08 (01:34 PM) 
Loving it..thsi is good...its absolutely flawless...you got mad skillz bra...i love your work..ten

  angeleyes1
09/24/08 (04:40 PM) 
very hot write so great flowing down the page keep flowing poet much love

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