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"Free At Last(part 1)"
  by Skilled Abode


Like a seed I was sown
In the earth deep and dark
Helpless and hopeless
Like a prisoner in a dungeon
At the mercy of the guard
Keep me or discard me
My fate uncertain
Till the day of harvest
All alone in the midst of co-prisoners
Sentenced to life inprisonment
Observing their state
A drop of hope
Filtered into my ribs
Fed through a tiny hose
My only source of strenght
Sleeps in darkness
Rises in darkness
Counting my pulses
Hoping one day to see my kind
Like the plumule
I had only one target-the exterior
Waiting inpatiently for the set time...
Suddenly I heard a sound, "pum"
The prison gate thrown wide open
Helpless still
From the other side I heard
A deep voice calling
"At the count of three push"
"1-2-3 puuuuuush"
Whoever did the pushing I knew not
All I knew was that I was out at last
Though in the hands of the commander
But that bothered me no bit
After all for the first time
My innocent eyes saw the light
I am sure they wondered why I wept
Tears of joy offcourse
If only they knew what I had gone through
These uncertain weeks
In my gentle heart I whispered
"FREE AT LAST"
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Date Submitted: Jun 30, 2007 (06:57 AM)
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  Sha-Money
07/03/07 (12:57 PM) 
damn, this might just be thee Deapest poem i have ever read, real talk, reminds me of that song happy birthday, by that rapper pipper, (flipside) (we the people) in which he is talking about him sorry for ever lettin his chick have an abortion, its deep though, real talk

  Syndel
06/30/07 (11:35 AM) 
this was very touching the vibe and the feeling carring thur this piece was beautiful the sweet smell of freedom this was excellent

  Gunz
06/30/07 (09:11 AM) 
there is nothing more beautiful than the gift of life...hard to make but yet we find it so easy to take....keep scribing poet...10 star

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