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"Free Write (I'm Angry)"
  by DOMINICANPOET


Free write that rhymes lol....

No beat but I'M gone make this write cry....For Every solider who's injured or died
In the line of duty or fighting for United states....No More like for Bush's estates....
Cause Me I haven't seen any Good.....How Did it effect the hood?
How we fight a war and win???....But Go back, spend our money to fix it again??
Only thing it did was rise our gas to over 4 dollars a gallon......I Don't know much about the war this is just a vent....
Lost a brother to this war, better yet this president.....The Funniest thing was he was only 18, not old enough to hold a beer.....
But to the government he was old enough to fight and use all this combat gear??...Yes He did chose to go to the military...
But he DID not choose to die before he got married....Had Children, Just wanted an easy way to get educated....
His reasons may have been selfish.....but He wanted a better life to live then this....
But as his year went on, those dreams slowly faded......They Needed him front line in a hurry....
Called me up....saying Damn sis do you think I should flee?? With those thoughts I told him no....And That was the last time he spoke to me.........I Really don't know how my mom's found out....But The second I found out...my Mind remained millions of doubts....So Yes IM very angry with the world and what's going on.....Not Just for my brother, but for all the families who have lost their loved ones.......You Know I don't blame myself for telling him to go....But Sometimes I think damn maybe I should have told him to flee, get arrested, do his time, but he'd be out you know...... Not like this Gone forever.... And you know the Government had the nerve.....Sorry For your lost, for that we will reimburse.....How Are you going to do that???Reenact his birth???......Money??We Don't want that......We Just want our lil brother back..... They always say...yea It was their time to go....Even I do but for some reason I don't believe it was his though.......


R.I.P to all the fallen soliders...You will never be forgotten....
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Date Submitted: Jul 27, 2008 (01:07 AM)
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  Deaths Enemy
12/17/08 (11:02 PM) 
I feel your pain.Its sad how people die in the wars so young..10 stars no doubt

  biscuit
12/03/08 (09:15 AM) 
whoa dis soo reall nice write

  LABEBAMORENA
11/29/08 (07:18 AM) 
most def a good one to sip on....love it, this right here going on my fav list....r.i.p 2 all the lost ones !!!!

  stricklyfromth...
11/16/08 (10:41 PM) 
for sure mamma i understand ya anger.... got a cuzo in the same situation...

  glo
11/11/08 (12:49 AM) 
wow that was hot, and you got alot off yo mind i can tell, keep this up i apprieciate it, for real 10 stars

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