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"Freedom"
  by Stargurl07*


Hands and feet shackled, shirtless backs whipped,
Unfortunate and unforgivable,
The world, losing all sense of humanity and moral,
The conclusion of Adam and Eve's demise.

Our fight for freedom has turned cold,
Our voice is left unheard,
Our eyes, open, but blind to morality,
God's message is heard, but are we listening?

Our hearts, the rocky, dark earth beneath our feet,
Our voices, fade with the voices of many,
Our eyes, blind from what's happening in our midst,
Our minds, controlled by the media's wishes.

Our wrong actions are shadowed by the works of others,
The human race, at stake, for our own wrongdoings,
Our acts, changing, will reverse morbid outcomes,
Standing together, we fight for freedom.

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Date Submitted: Sep 21, 2007 (08:57 PM)
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  Bud Edward
09/29/07 (08:02 PM) 
I really like the imagery in this. and I like how it ends on a positive note. Freedom is our right, and also our responsibility.

  Reg Jr
09/27/07 (03:41 PM) 
That is a great poem.

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