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"FREESTYLE #3"
  by Young Deeq





Yo I was borned In Jane & Finch
Raised In Hamilton,
I got abuse physically,
But now I'm speaking out my thoughts lyrically,
I gotta admit Lifes hard,
Growing up in the neighborhood,
Wasn't so good,
I always thought it would be better then I thought it should,
Being the only real son,
So many jobs and so many stuffs I've done,
Still haven't satisfied my families needs,
Its very sad indeed,
But Someday I promise you,
I'll be in the top and be in the lead,
Getting those girls,
Selling em Weeds,
Being the person I've always wanted,
No screw up now,
I've worked my way all the way here,
And I ain't stopping now,
Soon Im going to have a throne,
And people will be giving me bows,
And milking me some cows,
Instead of beef,
Like a fallen leaf,
But Damn, this isnt right,
I have all the money I needed,
But my life is still poisoned by emotions,
Its still not treated,
Just wished I could burn those memories,
And Move On..
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Date Submitted: Sep 01, 2008 (11:18 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 09/23/08 (05:02 AM)
Author: Chainz.
Poem Title: The POINT OF No Retu...

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  Chainz.
09/23/08 (04:53 AM) 
damn ?! i have to do a response again just cause im feeeling it and im feeling the beat keep it gangsta homie 10 stars

  'x'GhOsT'x'
09/01/08 (05:32 PM) 
This was good , I liked it , Very true , Life's really hard , N , You were born Jane N Finch ? ? But , Yeah , I liked it a lot , Nice lyrics , N , Flow , I'm going to give you 10 stars without a doubt keep doing this good stuff

  IceyMa
09/01/08 (12:47 PM) 
I'm feelin it bay boi. I can def realate an i gotta tha same shyt.I realy like thiz joint an gotz ta fav it. Def 10...don put down ya pen.

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